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湾湾的青乌林

A letter to a young writer | No.3

Dear Wanwan,


I am just too excited to sleep. The problem that has stopped me from being me for severalmonths is finally clear now. Oh my God! Too relieved that I have to get up now and write part of it out so as to clam myself down. Now Iunderstand why I was so frustrated and I understand how I should...

Dear Wanwan,


I am just too excited to sleep. The problem that has stopped me from being me for severalmonths is finally clear now. Oh my God! Too relieved that I have to get up now and write part of it out so as to clam myself down. Now Iunderstand why I was so frustrated and I understand how I should deal with it. I see my way. I see it! 

I was already thinking about writing an articlethat revisions the past few years of my life and points out the new direction. I am so excited thinking about all that I can barely fall asleep. 

I’m a mad man now. 

I was frustrated about trying to be an intellectual. But it turns out that an intellectual can bedefined in multiple ways. I can still try to be one of them. I just need to find a proper perspective. 

I was frustrated by politics. Now I see my limits. I’ll rebuild my way according to my passion and heart. 

一艘没有方向的船,任何一个方向的风都会成为它的阻力。

This sentence has occupied my mind for these several months and drived me crazy. I was so afraid of failures and I was terrified of the idea that I may just waste my life day by day without a purpose. I’m glad the new day finally come. 

The politicized depression, now it’s time to personalize my life. I’ll strive for what I aim for. 


Thank you for trying. Thank you for keeping thinking. Thank you for being alive. Thank you for your stupidity and stubbornness. 

I love you and always support you.


Best,

Worm of Summer

夏虫

goof呆

Crazy desire

I gradually became dull and solemn, silent and mediocre. I used to be so frightened that I became bored, but I ran day by day into a life of clean water.I am so eager for beauty and love, a bright future and a good age.I believe that where there is a will, there is a way. I will be better. It will...








I gradually became dull and solemn, silent and mediocre. I used to be so frightened that I became bored, but I ran day by day into a life of clean water.I am so eager for beauty and love, a bright future and a good age.I believe that where there is a will, there is a way. I will be better. It will get better and better.My crazy desire, deep voice, blurred eyes and sincere cries, I look forward to the nirvana of some day in the future.




I live so enthusiastically and sincerely, expecting a luxurious and flashy future. Stay away from this dull and repetitive life, from such embarrassing people and things.Originally, I was in a quagmire. I had no place to talk. I was afflicted by illness. Life depressed me. I was socially decadent.So I write, day and night, that's my recipe for escapism. 




Now, I don't have those pains. I have a new life. I have friends and praises. I can see the beauty of the world. I cherish every feeling. I meet and leave.I have finally become a happy person, a humorous and valuable person, a person who does not care about love and hate, but lives lightly and clearly.




You don't have to lock yourself in the shackles, you don't have to speculate on philosophy, you don't have to jump out of the comfort zone.Life is made up of many moments and finally comes back to smoke.We are in it, powerless like a mayfly, instantaneous has been a lifetime.Thousands of words used to be condensed into a sigh. 




Past love and hate, sadness and joy, they are finally past. Eventually, no matter how far or near it is, I don't pay attention to it.

goof呆

Some thoughts?

I find that when I truly accept myself, love myself, sympathize with myself, and recognize myself, many emptiness and doubts come to mind. I don't know whether my choice is right or not. I don't know whether the praise and pursuit from the outside world will continue. I don't know whether I will follow...








I find that when I truly accept myself, love myself, sympathize with myself, and recognize myself, many emptiness and doubts come to mind. I don't know whether my choice is right or not. I don't know whether the praise and pursuit from the outside world will continue. I don't know whether I will follow suit or have a bright future.The original comfort is to strangle all your possibilities, is to let you be willing to indulge in suffocation in the comfort circle, is your unrepentant degeneration. 




It is only because of the empty appearance that it is also a mirage.I found that I could not write. I no longer believe that the acknowledged happiness is immediately extinguished by anxiety and resentment and pain.I am no longer irritable, sensitive and suspicious. I am confident, generous and humorous, but I also lost my most precious things. I used to believe in conservation, and I thought someone could get everything for no reason. 




But now I am absolutely convinced that there are no gold keys and crystal shoes. We exchange things for each other. All gifts that we thought were given by God are priced in secret.Gradually, it was occupied by the secular world.You ask me, when fame and fortune fill the heart and lungs, when poetry, wine, flowers and tea are far away, they become past.




I went back and forth trying to find the candlelight that I had abandoned. I repeat it over and over again, monotonous and unremitting.I tried to put aside my obsession and return to that pure heart.I tried to look up and look for my cloud in the bright light.All my weaknesses, all my weird ideas.Maybe they has been covered by the sand of time, maybe they are still alive.




Anyway, I love it. Love literature and writing, love photography and life, love the world, love me.Being alone is the most relaxing time. Listen to the tune of the chaotic song, write some words, imagination, free.Warmth is the temperature of transmission, and it is also the thing I most desire. In the winter and snow, I hide my hot heart and embrace the people I love, melting my heart.

湾湾的青乌林

A Letter to a Young Writer | No.1

Dear wanwan,


I’m writing to you to fully address the anxiety that has been controlling you. I wish to show you the truth about your life, sweeping away illusions created by your fear. 

Dear dear me, I want you to believe in your ability to achieve and I demand you to dedicate every day into...

Dear wanwan,


I’m writing to you to fully address the anxiety that has been controlling you. I wish to show you the truth about your life, sweeping away illusions created by your fear. 

Dear dear me, I want you to believe in your ability to achieve and I demand you to dedicate every day into exploring yourself and betteryour talent. 

Luckily, you now are loved. So, please make the effort to seek truth, to allow yourself a more profound life experience. 

By reading comprehensively, thinking systematically, and writing purposefully, I hope you will eventually grow into a full blossom. 

I’ve seen that light in you. Please keep watering your tree. 

Write on your phone if not your computer. 

No matter what happens, I’m here with you. I’m here to love you. I’m here to help you see things clearly. 

In the middle of a night, I wake up. I think of my life. There’s one thing I’d love to achieve, to write out a satisfying book, to leave it in this world. 


Love,

Summer Worm

夏虫

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英语考试的写作有什么提分方法技巧

英语写作的重要性

英语作文是一项主观性较强的测试题。它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力。答案开放、多元,有利于培养学生的创新思维。英语作文决不是停留在句子翻译的层面上,而是要求语言流畅,语法正确,逻辑合理。考生在写作时要把握好三个环节:写作之前:仔细审题、按规定写、准备写作。写作之中:书法规范、精心构思、行文正确。写作之后:通读全文、查找错误、周密推敲。

英语写作是语言应用的一个重要方面,也是语言能力测定的重要手段,衡量写作水平的标准便是看其是否能用学过的语言材料,语法知识等用文字的形式来表达描述。

书面语言表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达。先是思...

英语写作的重要性

英语作文是一项主观性较强的测试题。它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力。答案开放、多元,有利于培养学生的创新思维。英语作文决不是停留在句子翻译的层面上,而是要求语言流畅,语法正确,逻辑合理。考生在写作时要把握好三个环节:写作之前:仔细审题、按规定写、准备写作。写作之中:书法规范、精心构思、行文正确。写作之后:通读全文、查找错误、周密推敲。

英语写作是语言应用的一个重要方面,也是语言能力测定的重要手段,衡量写作水平的标准便是看其是否能用学过的语言材料,语法知识等用文字的形式来表达描述。

书面语言表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达。先是思维,把要写的东西在脑中思考,这往往是个别的,孤立的一些素材,很凌乱琐碎;因此要对此进行组织,把这些思维作出整理,使其条理、系统化,但这还是较粗糙的,可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误;最后才是表达,把组织过的材料仔细推敲,确无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等,这就是写作。上述的三个过程,最难的就是第三个过程,这需要我们有较好的语法知识,掌握一定数量的句型,习惯用语,熟练的写作技巧,这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来。

总之,要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。

究竟怎样才能写好作文呢?

阅读优秀范文

首先要搞好阅读。阅读是写作的基础,在阅读方面下的功夫越深,驾驭语言的能力也就越强。所以要写好英语先要读好英语,在语言学习方面狠下苦功,教科书要读透,因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文,文笔流畅,语言规范,精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。再就是要进行大量课外阅读,并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。

加强练词造句训练

其次,要加强练词造句的训练。词句对作文相当于造房的材料,无好材料就造不出好房子。平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累,把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录,再对照正确句子,使地道的英语句子如同条件反射,落笔就对。了解英语写作格式还有,要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式。可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书,对英语写作有一个初步的概念,如怎么写议论文,如何提出论据,如何展开,如何确定中心句;又如,英语信的格式,如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等,然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习。

用英语写日记

要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯。经常用英语记日记,等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法。在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等,使文句更优美生动。还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔。写好后对照范文,找出差距,然后再练习,这对提高英语作文也很有帮助,在游泳中学会游泳,只有多练习才能练好。

总之,平时学习语言素材积累多了,体裁格式记住了又经常练习不断提高,到作文下笔时就会得心应手,水到渠成。

英语写作水平提升的方法

1.加强阅读量的提升

不断地地阅读主要是想要提升个人对英文的语感,这样在写作的时候也能够有更多词汇涌现,可以帮助自己更好地完成整个写作任务。

2.学会模仿优秀范文

对于一些日常优秀的英文写作范文,自己可以先模仿他们的写作风格,充分理解优秀英文范文的写作风格和技巧,都是一种不错的提升方式。

3.加强语法知识的巩固

在写作的过程中,不仅要保证写作语句的通顺,更重要的还是要注重语法知识的正确性,因此对语法知识的学习和了解也是非常重要的一点。

4.背诵一些常用句型

在写作中,我们为了避免自己不知道该如何让语句之间连贯起来,这个时候在日常的学习中,就可以多背诵一些常用写作句型,以备在写作用到。

5.背诵一些名言警句

一些简单地名言警句背诵,也主要是为了给文章添加色彩,如果能够巧妙地运用这些名言警句,都可以帮助你的写作内容提升到另外一个档次。

6.加强日常写作练习

为了保证自己在写作水平快速提高,自己在日常的学习中,也应该加强多写作练习,这样多写一些题材,自然也就加深自己对语言写作的印象。

台上一分钟,台下十年功。要想提高写作技巧,没有一定量的坚持练习,也是不行的。可以通过每天写日记,或者网络博客的方式,记录自己的所见所闻,当然,你要练习的是英文或者其他外语来书写,不然就起不到效果。

——选自:合肥翻译公司

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Ethylnerd
#听力打卡# 尼尔盖曼大师课的...

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尼尔盖曼大师课的第四集,Finding your voice。截图那个沙雕弹幕就是我……


只记录了大意,非全部字幕,无校对,当笔记用。


“Style is the stuff that you made wrong.” A writer’s voice is what the reader respond to most, and one of the problems of young writer is you don't sound like anybody yet.


1. Start with Imitation

When starting out...

#听力打卡#


尼尔盖曼大师课的第四集,Finding your voice。截图那个沙雕弹幕就是我……


只记录了大意,非全部字幕,无校对,当笔记用。


“Style is the stuff that you made wrong.” A writer’s voice is what the reader respond to most, and one of the problems of young writer is you don't sound like anybody yet.


1. Start with Imitation

When starting out, you may just imitate if you see something you love. You start out by getting it wrong, but the most important thing is you do just write. Seeing your past was wonderful, you know your voice is there and you just need todo more writing.


2. Get the bad words out

Mistakes may be the most important thing to a writer. But how do you find them? That’s very easy cuz you do stuff. The process of trying to create something and so on is what you need to grow up. That’s huge. As a writer, and as a young writer, you job is to getting the bad words out, bad stories out to let the good things out. And you don’t ever get them out thinking”this is a bad story”, you may think it’s a great idea, but the most important thing is getting that out. You can write something that the critics don’t like or nobody reads, that’s okay. After you’vewritten 10,000 words, 50,000 words, 150,000 words, you will find your voice, it’s gonna be there anyway.


3. Finish things

Everything you do is to find your voice as a young writer. But the most important thing that will teach you who you’re isyou write and finish things if you can. I had probability several hundreds of first pages in my attic, I had some setups, characters and I wanna see what may happen, and I’d let them be sputtered, flamed out and that’s okay cuz I could just start another one. And at the age of 21 I started to realize I have to finish things, then the provement began to be quantum. Because as you finish things, you learn more from finishing a failure than you do from writing a success, and definitely more than you start something that’s fantastic but stop.


4. Find the voices of a story

You may notice the different feel or language of my stories,they could almost be noticed as written by different people.But there’s an uniformity there, not necessarily of the word choice or voice, it’s more about the attitude, the soul, the thing you take away from that story. If you’re a young writer or a writer trying to get a project getting out, just take a stab at it. Sit down and think about the most important things, does it feel like a first person or a third person? Who’s tellingyou the story? Does that matter who’s telling you the story?

The author is actually invisible, the story and voice is already there and you will do nothing more than drawing attention to yourself as a writer. There’re narrative voices, and they come to disappearing into the story. When using the third person narrative, the important thing becomes the voice of the narrator. At that point the voice you’re looking for isn’t particularly the writer’s voice, but the narrator’s voice. It’s quite convincing, like someone holding your hand saying" let’s walk into the dark places". That’d be a fun one to imitate.

Ethylnerd
#听力打卡# 尼尔盖曼大师课第...

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尼尔盖曼大师课第三部分,关于灵感来源。这是个相当重要的问题。


概括一下,其一,写作灵感未必来自文学本身,可以是音乐等其他形式的艺术,他们如何调动受众情感,是可以移花接木到写作中的,所以要“open yourself to everything” ;其二,灵感可来自改编所熟悉的故事,比如白雪公主这样的外貌只可能是吸血鬼,这样一来皇后就成了这里的heroine,这是很好的发散练习;其三则是confluence,有道内置的牛津词典解释为“the fact of two or more things becoming one”,比如说如果狼人咬了椅子会怎么样?你是不...

#听力打卡#


尼尔盖曼大师课第三部分,关于灵感来源。这是个相当重要的问题。


概括一下,其一,写作灵感未必来自文学本身,可以是音乐等其他形式的艺术,他们如何调动受众情感,是可以移花接木到写作中的,所以要“open yourself to everything” ;其二,灵感可来自改编所熟悉的故事,比如白雪公主这样的外貌只可能是吸血鬼,这样一来皇后就成了这里的heroine,这是很好的发散练习;其三则是confluence,有道内置的牛津词典解释为“the fact of two or more things becoming one”,比如说如果狼人咬了椅子会怎么样?你是不是可以在故事里写大侦探在图书馆里调查凶案现场的时候,他所坐的椅子变大、变得毛茸茸,还动了起来?


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Corliss

青春校园玛丽苏狗血外语文学—Wink Chapter 1-Week 3

From 17th, September 


Tuesday would be the biggest day in every week for Ally from today on.


The schedule said that the English writing course was given by Edward, which arouse disappointment around ladies in the classroom. Cause that’s a very old name as you may even describe the owner as...

From 17th, September 


Tuesday would be the biggest day in every week for Ally from today on.


The schedule said that the English writing course was given by Edward, which arouse disappointment around ladies in the classroom. Cause that’s a very old name as you may even describe the owner as being hoary with age, reduced to a mumbling wreck. 


‘Edward, that sounds like an aristocrat of the old school.’ Then, from celebrity gossip to newest fashions, ladies did chitchats to kill the time before the bell rang.


When everybody was getting familiar with each other before class, our Ally, had just dressed up and rushed out of her dormitory, on the verge of being late. The campus, however, was too large for a fresh lady with poor sense of direction like her. She kept her head down all the way, eyes glued to the cellphone map, and sometimes made an abrupt turning-back when rushing. ‘Only five minutes left!’ Fortunately, there was the last turning to make. Ally put her phone aside and dashed like a sword, her long messy hair flying over her face.


Great! Now, turn left, and forward! Ally screamed in heart.


But as she rounded a sharp curve, she bumped into someone at the corner, and lost her footing. The man’s bag was pushed open with paper throwing out all over the ground. He squatted down, in no hurry picked it back into his bag. Through the cold sunshine in early autumn and the chilly breeze, Ally was enchanted by the quiet motionless profile in dark red wool waistcoat.


‘May I?’ Like a kid committing a mistake, she asked awkwardly.


‘Never mind.’ He has a fine bass voice in heavy British accent, head still dropping down, concentrated on his work.


I’m fear of being late, Ally left in a guilty mind. On the way, she was sorry for not catching his face clearly.


When she hurried to the classroom, only seats in first few lines were vacant. Whatever, she quickly took a seat, fixing her hair. Ladies behind looked at the invader cause the common view is that taking seats in first rows only happens in a primary school.


‘I’ll teach you the writing lesson this term.’


Behind the door walked in a tall man in his early-30s, probably, with light golden curly hair and a strong jaw. Before he laid his leather handbag on the platform, his melancholy brown eyes sharply glimpsed at a piece of wrinkled tissue on the floor. Wincing, he quietly pinched it up, threw it into the rubbish bin, then went back to the platform, standing straight. ‘By the way, I’m Carl, Curtis Carl, or you can just call me Curtis, never mind.’


In respect for a lecturer, Ally lifted her eyes, quietly looking at the speaking man. 


He was in dark red.


Ladies whispered, regretting that they had taken the seats backwards, which is a common habit of college students to avoid any possible involvement with lecturers, but right now it put the ladies at a disadvantage, except Ally.


She is an ordinary girl as what you can find on street. However, sometimes she is not so mainstream-like in others’ eyes. When everybody tries to dive into, squeeze into a crowd for a sense of safety, she cares nothing about being in or out.


The whole class didn’t interact much because of the distance with Curtis. Avoidance led by shyness is another great nature among the ladies, who from time to time glanced at the gentleman but never stood out for answering any question he raised.


Curtis was a little embarrassed, having no idea that the class could be so dull——at least, in his eyes, it was.


‘That’s all for today, any question?’ 


Silence, horrible silence.


Suddenly, a hand rose up high in front of his eyes. Thats Ally, who wore a smile, staring at the very close man, winked.


Curtis felt a stream of consolation, not too bad, right? But the following words froze the situation to another horrible silence.


‘Djuve a girlfriend?’ That’s Ally’s trick——a liaison between ‘do’ and ‘you’ and ‘have’. Good native British imitation.


Ladies’ eyes suddenly sparkled to the man behind the platform. Before Curtis had a chance to say something, that bell rang, ending the ridiculousness.


Curtis soon packed his notes and books into while ladies twittering left the classroom one by one. Then, there were just Curtis and Ally in the room. Obviously, she was not planning for leaving immediately at all.


Ensuring nobody here except themselves, Ally bounced up off her seat, walking towards the platform. 


‘Excuse me?’ Blush hid nowhere on his extremely fair cheek.


‘What’s your plan this eve? May I invite you out?’


Ally glanced around the platform. An exquisite pen with word C engraved on it came into her eyes. Casually she picked up and watched it carefully. ‘Charming.’ She said, ‘Moonlight bar, Sanju Road, see you there, if you want it back.’ Then she shove it into her pocket in no second.


Gazing at the happy bouncing figure out of the classroom, Curtis was left in deep confusion. He should’ve been mad for the impoliteness, rudeness and ridiculousness of the lady, but he was just stunned, brain blank at that moment. Anyhow, he had to go, for the pen, for the date.


Night fell over the city. Sanju Road was covered by alcohol and music. Ally had already arrived, waiting in idle moments.


After a day’s work, Curtis looked pale when he stepped into the bar, colorful lights reflecting on his skin as a naughty kid scrawled on it with crayons. 


‘Long Island Iced Tea, for two, please.’ Ally leaned on the bar counter, ordering loudly to catch Curtis’s attention.


Through dancing bodies and pervasive fragrant alcohol, Curtis made his way to Ally. She wore simply and a black vest matched with tight jeans pictured her dedicate figure clearly. No make-up, no concealer, no foundation.


Ally took out the pen. ‘It looks like something to you.’


Sipping at his drink, Curtis said slowly, ‘It was a birthday gift from my mother.’


Assuming that her mother might passed away, Ally took a grim look at him and became quiet.


Curtis noticed her grieve misunderstanding, snd smiled, ‘Not what you think, they just divorced, but still friends.’ He dropped head down, fiddled with his glass, gazed at liquid, took another sip.


‘And hey, you haven’t answered my question yet, Mr. Carl.’ Ally converted the topic into a right way, aiming to  dominate it.


He looked at Ally for a while before breaking into a soft chuckle, ‘No matter what the answer is, I’m a teacher and you are a student, that’s the thing, right?’


‘That’s the thing. Another thing, however, you ignore is that you are also a human, and I’m a human.’


‘Remind you, human is non-countable.’ Emotionlessly said Curtis.


‘Ok, fine, how about you’re a man and I’m a lady.’ With a sudden pause, She continued, ‘man sounds old and dumb, how about a, boy?’ She fixed her gaze on him and drained her glass. With drunk giggles, Ally said, ‘ You don’t even know, I mean, I mean I can see a big boy inside you, when you become shy, and when you try to be calm, that’s it, don’t move, that’s what you look right now, that’s damn cute.’ Ally’s face turned blur under dim light.


‘Waiter, one more,’


Curtis interrupted, ‘Here’s not for you.’


Ally said it right, Curtis knew. From the start, he had been made an earnest endeavor to calmness. He is much more mature indeed, but he couldn’t figure out why he felt a subtle feeling streaming down to his heart. 


Unreversed bold passion is a valuable gift of youngest.


Curtis was lost in his thought so that he didn’t notice some rascally guys approaching them. It’s no hard task observing a handsome gentleman and a drowsy girl in the counter. They are too quiet, too strange in the noisy bar.


‘Hello? Hi?’ A guy tried to accost.


‘Let’s go.’ Curtis, with no consciousness, hugged over Ally and walked out together.


Curtis’s blond hair was windblown. To be honest, it was chilly at night. Out of a gentlemen nature, Curtis took off his long thin coat onto Ally, protecting the vulnerable lady against the wind.


Even though, Ally involuntarily sneezed.


Like nothing had happened, Curtis said, ‘I shall send you back to your dorm.’


‘I don’t think I can climb over the dorm gate. It’s closed already.’ That was obviously an excuse but Curtis has no idea of the fact.


Thinking for a little while, he surrendered, ‘Fine.’


When Ally woke up, it was a brand morning. She turned over on her stomach on the other side of the bed, then realizing herself in a plain but neat bedroom which was papered in soft grey. Before she figured out what happened, Curtis stepped in with a cup of coffee and several pieces of bread.


‘Morning.’ Curtis greeted without any more expression, then sat on the edge of an unyielding armchair by the bed. Ally took over the food, sipping from her coffee mug, watching him over the rim carefully.


‘The...the coffee is good, um...’ Ally broke the awkward silence.


Curtis smiled, not saying more. He waited until Ally  finished her dishes patiently. Ally felt a bit embarrassing, so she just looked around the poorly-furnished room.


‘Oh, it’s 8:20, I’m totally late for the first class.’ When Ally fell her eyesight on the clock, she almost choked.


‘Easy, you can’t change anything even if you now start rushing to the classroom. Take a good rest.’


‘Wait, why I’m so smelly?’ Ally’s smell ability came to itself now. She looked down at her clothes. It was stained; even if it was not so obvious on black clothes.


‘You threw up last night and...’


‘And you just let it be?’ Ally raised up her voice.


‘Or?’ Curtis narrowed his eyes.


Ally was wordless, and it was also the first time that Ally blushed. She used to be brave, even yesterday she was.


Curtis felt the atmosphere ambiguity, so he opened a new sentence, ‘The washing machine is in the bathroom. And there’re shirts in the wardrobe if you need.’ He took the cup and plate from Ally and walked out straight.

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请问,小学生文笔的英文小说 有人看吗嘤嘤嘤

又名超甜玛丽苏现实主义校园外语文学。

请问,小学生文笔的英文小说 有人看吗嘤嘤嘤

又名超甜玛丽苏现实主义校园外语文学。

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滨松

【盾铁】See You Once More

之前 I Don't Want to See You Anymore 的后续。

好像有点虐啊。

注意是英语,请原谅我只是做个写作练习而已。。。

依旧点击此处开始英语阅读

之前 I Don't Want to See You Anymore 的后续。

好像有点虐啊。

注意是英语,请原谅我只是做个写作练习而已。。。

依旧点击此处开始英语阅读

滨松

【盾铁】I don’t want to see you anymore

英语写作练习。

故事在内战之后,Tony假装自己一点也不想见Steve,其实他脑子里一直在想Steve。

请原谅我英语写作技能的贫乏。。。

点此进入英语阅读测试(非常简单的那种)

有一个后续的,在这里预告一下

英语写作练习。

故事在内战之后,Tony假装自己一点也不想见Steve,其实他脑子里一直在想Steve。

请原谅我英语写作技能的贫乏。。。

点此进入英语阅读测试(非常简单的那种)

有一个后续的,在这里预告一下

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Enheduanna (安海度亚娜)

文学史上第一位有记录的作者。

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Life and Works of Enheduanna

Enheduanna, an Akkadian princess, priestess, and poetess, is known to be the earliest recorded author in the history of world literature. She was the daughter of Sargon I, king of Akkad. As the first ruler of the Akkadian Empire, Sargon united northern...

文学史上第一位有记录的作者。

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Life and Works of Enheduanna

Enheduanna, an Akkadian princess, priestess, and poetess, is known to be the earliest recorded author in the history of world literature. She was the daughter of Sargon I, king of Akkad. As the first ruler of the Akkadian Empire, Sargon united northern and southern Mesopotamia through his conquests of Sumerian city-states (Lion 2011, 96). Appointed by her father, Enheduanna served as the High Priestess of Ur, one of the most influential religious centres in southern Mesopotamia. Many of her works are devotions and hymns to Inanna, goddess of love and war, one of the most popular deities of ancient Mesopotamia (Halton and Svärd 2017, 51).

Archeologists first discovered the existence ofEnheduanna in an excavation of the ancient city-state of Ur, located in modern-day Iraq. The excavation was led by an English archeologist named Leonard Woolley. In his book, Excavations at Ur: a Record of Twelve Years'Work, Woolley states that they discovered an alabaster disc at the temple of the Moon-goddess that was carved in relief the portrait of the High Priestess as well as an inscription revealing her to be Enheduanna, daughter of king Sargon of Akkad (Woolley 1954, 115).

The name “Enheduanna” is Sumerian, which she presumably took after been appointed the High Priestess of Ur. As the daughter of Sargon I, Enheduanna played a role in her father’s effort to reconcile with the rising hostility in his newly conquered land of southern Mesopotamia. The animosity was, in part, caused by Sargon’s policy of installing Akkadian as the official language to replace Sumerian, which was widely spoken in southern Mesopotamia (Haltonand Svärd 2017, 51).

Within the impressive amount of work attributed to her, most are religious hymns and poetry, including a cycle of forty-two hymns to the temples of Summer and Akkad. These hymns are believed to have significant contributions to Mesopotamian theology (Lion 2011, 96-97). Many of her temple hymns serve as systematic reinterpretations of traditional Sumerian beliefs. Her cycle of hymns to the goddess Inanna, however, display more of her personal devotion and passion than the somewhat systematic temple hymns (Hallo and van Dijk 1982, 4-5).

In her composition, The Exaltation of Inanna, Enheduanna wrote extensively in the first person and directly expressed her devotion to Inanna. This poem includes a narrative of Enheduannas expulsion from the temple at Ur. However, we cannot confirm whether this story of banishment was based on real events due to the lack of supporting evidence from other sources (Halton and Svärd 2017, 93). In section (ix) of the poem, titled“The Banishment from Ur”, she wrote: “67 I, the high priestess, I, Enheduanna!… 69 I, even I, can no longer live with you!” in expressing her indignation towards her banishment from the temple (Hallo and van Dijk 1982, 23).

Enheduanna established a tradition for women of royal lineage to take on priestly roles. As the High Priestess of Ur, she likely supervised the organization of temple rituals and the maintenance of the temple complex (Halton and Svärd 2017, 51). Her poetic works seemingly had significant influences on later literature as well, indicated by the long-lasting popularity enjoyed by her poems in the Old Babylonian Period, hundreds of years after her death (Hallo and van Dijk 1982, 4).

 

Bibliography:

Hallo, William W., and J. J. A. van Dijk. 1982. The Exaltation of Inanna. New York: AMS Press.

 

Halton, Charles, and Saana Svärd. 2017. Women's Writing of Ancient Mesopotamia: An Anthology of the Earliest Female Authors.New York: Cambridge University Press.

 

Lion, Brigitte. 2011. “Literacy and Gender.” In TheOxford Handbook of Cuneiform Culture, edited by Karen Radner and Eleanor Robson, 90–107. Oxford: Oxford University Press.

 

Woolley, Leonard. 1954. Excavations at Ur: ARecord of Twelve Years’ Work. London: Ernest Benn.


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如何解锁你的雅思分数?(老法师请自觉绕道)

如何解锁你的雅思分数?(老法师请自觉绕道)


前期储备:

背单词,新东方绿皮书 GRE,相信我,雅思那本书上那点词根本不够支撑正常的英文书籍阅读,如果你不想成为只会做题的小机器人,背单词吧。


背单词真的能提升阅读体验。背单词的资料是根据自己的学习习惯选择的啦。选择书的主要原因是,完完整整把一本书的单词都背会,能对自己的词汇量有比较好的认知。词汇就是一个量化的过程。

背完GRE那本书,阅读词汇量基本超过1万了;

如果配合了MP3 听力词汇应该略有提高;

如果背了例句,真好,写作有望能用上这些词;

遗憾的是,此时口语词汇量基本没动。‍

刷题...

如何解锁你的雅思分数?(老法师请自觉绕道)



 

前期储备:

背单词,新东方绿皮书 GRE,相信我,雅思那本书上那点词根本不够支撑正常的英文书籍阅读,如果你不想成为只会做题的小机器人,背单词吧。


背单词真的能提升阅读体验。背单词的资料是根据自己的学习习惯选择的啦。选择书的主要原因是,完完整整把一本书的单词都背会,能对自己的词汇量有比较好的认知。词汇就是一个量化的过程。

背完GRE那本书,阅读词汇量基本超过1万了;

如果配合了MP3 听力词汇应该略有提高;

如果背了例句,真好,写作有望能用上这些词;

遗憾的是,此时口语词汇量基本没动。‍

刷题资料:剑桥4-13,现在都已经出到13了。

阅读资料:各种英语原著,推荐经济学人,贵那也是真的贵。

如果着急考试,就使劲刷题,刷剑桥雅思真题,原题。

题量:

  基础好:左滑退出这篇文章;

     基础不好,考前一个月,至少每天一本书的量。用手机卡着 时间做,别拖延,别玩手机,让手机种树去吧,此处推荐forest

TIPS:

错的地方要反复阅读,你一定是哪里理解错了。

填空题都是送分题,速度要快。‍





四六级都过不去的小伙伴,请你首先听单词,认真的。千万不要说看着字幕你也能听出来这句话的意思。



听力问题可以归纳为两个问题:

1.    关键词抓取失败,单词听不懂。

2.    速度太快。

针对问题一:

听单词。

最可能出现的问题是,我们读单词读的不够标准+对单词熟悉度不够以至于在听力中并不分辨,看到答案才会恍然大悟,原来是这个词。

此处推荐:王陆仙女的书,请按照她的方法连续不断的练习英语单词听写,真的有效哦。

针对问题二:

倍速练习。

在练习剑桥原题的过程中,请使用1.2倍速甚至1.5倍速练习,先做原题,再精听。

做题练习和精听应该在词汇练习之后,词汇练习正确率低于90%之前,请专注听词汇,因为词汇不达标意味着你不能获得正确的信息,并且你的听力词汇量余额不足,不足以支撑成段的练习,请一定不要心急,不要想着一步到位。

就像四六级听力,很多小伙伴觉得太快了或者听着很熟悉,但想不起来,等想起来,录音早就过去好几句了。

词汇关过了之后。

就是倍速精听练习啦,不要使用原速度,不要不要不要。

原速度你刚好能做出题,到了考场上环境不适应加紧张加题难,就可能闯关失败哦。

如果日常练习都是1.2倍速以上,考试的时候就会觉得,是在慢慢给你念答案,感觉不要太好。

 







写作分数大于等于6.5

=没有语法错+有逻辑



语法:依旧推荐新东方的书,有一套三本装,初级,中级,高级。可以说非常好用了。如果时间充裕,备考三个月以上的,建议全文阅读。

限时:半个月。做好笔记,后期有问题随时翻阅。

阅读次数:两次。开始一次,中间一次。

其他装备:顾家北两本,绿色和黄色。

进阶装备:经济学人,柯林斯雅思辞典,用词非常生动‍。



写作观点表达基本格式:

中心句(idea) + 一句话解释+句一个栗子。



不要贪图高级语法,首先保证正确率,错误毁了你的整篇文章,与其用一个复杂的错误句子,不如用一个正确的简单句。建议长短句交替使用,不使用晦涩难懂的词汇,力求生动准确,一定要有逻辑,举出的例子能够证明中心句。不要给自己挖大坑。

小作文是得分项目,低分就是没练,憋说话!‍

 

 

 


这篇文章的顺序为什么不是听说读写,而是选择这样一个顺序向大家介绍呢?因为从读-听-写-说,是一个新词汇被吸收消化的全流程。背一个单词,从模糊有印象—看到认得—听到能分辨—自己写作中能想起来用一用—到脱口而出。


词汇并不是背一背就可以了,从读听到说写呈现的是一个从输入到输出的过程,只有先背单词,读文章,听内容才有可能转化为写和说常用单词。正常来说,读写类掌握的词汇量大于听说类。

首先说,英语流利说对改善口语真的作用不大。这句话我是顶着锅盖说的。‍


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说说为什么这个软件对改善口语作用不大。

首先,作用不大,不是没有作用,评分机制可以改善你的口音,如果你每天坚持用的话。Of, good, is 等基础词汇会有改善,对改善口语发音有一些帮助。

缺点:说的过程不动脑。像是拄着拐棍走路,句子组织不经过大脑,关了软件口语输出能力依然不好,没有构思,你可能哑口无言,更别提口语的逻辑性了。

真的是,自己说。

在国内,我们没有语言环境是不争的事实,我们对着雅思哥上的话题说,给自己录音,回放。真的听一听你就能发现,即使我们不觉得自己口语很好,也还是高估了我们的口语水平,这就是为什么我们自己觉得口语分数应该有6.5了,考官只给了一个5.5。

听录音先改语法错。一定要说出声音来,长久不练口语,说英语天然就会紧张,卡顿,主语男女不分,人畜不辨;谓语动词三单常错。‍

如何解决没话说

比如说,让你说喜欢的一种植物吧,哑巴英语思维的典型是报了植物的名字之后脑子一片空白。其实,除了尴尬,你还可以这样做:

举个例子,比如考官让你说,你喜欢的一种植物。

1

实物描述

第一句,我喜欢桃花,桃花是什么颜色的巴拉巴拉。

2

添加场景回忆

春天,我大学校园的大桃花特别好看,桃花开了的时候我给它拍照还拿了奖,我跟谁分享了喜悦。

3

强调主题

因为这些美好的回忆,我一直都很喜欢桃花。

这是一个不太好的说法,但这个例子可以简单展示如何把话题展开,算是抛砖引玉吧,走在路上,去商场,去食堂,图书馆,见什么说什么,最开始每一个小点,至少说三句话,考试过程中,多说不吃亏,考官觉得你说多了会叫停的。

更多地词汇可以支撑你刻画细节和描述场景,思维的练习让你不再紧张。

我在考场上见过最紧张的考生,在门外就已经He,She 不分了,当时排队往考场走,他想跟我说,让我先,对带队的考场工作人员说:He 呃…………She first! 当时我就觉得他恐怕要凉。千万不要在考场上背诵你准备好的答案,只准备素材,在考试的时候串联素材,否则真的是凉凉预定了。

此外,雅思小作文建议优秀作文的说法可以吸收哦,这样就可以在口语中展示你了解到的数据增强观点的逻辑性和说服力。

加油!

 



英语练习时间表:

8:00-12:00 阅读及改错

2:00-4:00 单词听写

4:00-6:00 做题/精听

7:30-9:00 小作文+大作文

9:00-11:30 口语


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千万别把close to home翻译成“离家很近”,它的意思其实是…

  说到家(home)
  它可不像表面看起来那么简单哦~
  比如说,短语“close to home”
  表面看起来的确有“离家很近”的意思
  但在更多的场景中它却不能单纯理解
  今天就一起来看看
  home有哪些意想不到的用法吧~

  NO.1
  close to home
  如果有人跟你发生争执时说“close to home”,你可不要以为他说的是“吵不过想回家”。

  close to home的意思,其实可以翻译为“affecting one personally and intimately/戳到痛点”。

  美剧《破产姐妹》中就有这么一句,too close to home 是说事情触...

  说到家(home)
  它可不像表面看起来那么简单哦~
  比如说,短语“close to home”
  表面看起来的确有“离家很近”的意思
  但在更多的场景中它却不能单纯理解
  今天就一起来看看
  home有哪些意想不到的用法吧~

  NO.1
  close to home
  如果有人跟你发生争执时说“close to home”,你可不要以为他说的是“吵不过想回家”。

  close to home的意思,其实可以翻译为“affecting one personally and intimately/戳到痛点”。

  美剧《破产姐妹》中就有这么一句,too close to home 是说事情触及痛处,形容让人切身体会的问题/事情。

  因此,当和外国朋友沟通时,如果ta的某句话戳中你的伤心事,你便可以说“It hit close to home.”

  例句:
  That movie about the war hit too close to home.
  电影里关于战争的部分太戳心了。

  NO.2
  hit a home run
  hit a home run的意思是“to succeed with something/本垒打、全胜”。

  例句:
  He finally hit a home run. 
  他终于成功了。

  NO.3
  home free
  依旧是一个非常值得高兴的词,home free的意思是“sure of success because you have finished the most difficult part/稳赢,肯定得胜的;轻易取胜”。

  例句:
  Are you home free in the game? 
  这一场你会轻易取胜吗?


  NO.4
  go home
  go home的确有“回家”的意思,但在不同的语境中使用,会有不同的含义。比如在国外的教室,老师说“go home”,就是让你“鸽吻”出教室;而当你的老板说“go home”,也就是“You are fired.”

  例句:
  --'I want you to go home.' 
  “我想让你回家。”
  --'I'm staying here, and that's that.' 
  “我就待在这儿,就这么定了。”

  NO.5
  bring home the bacon
  Bacon 培根,是英国人饭桌上常见的一种食物。将培根带回家,延伸含义,也就是“在外挣钱,从而维持家庭生计”,也就是“养家糊口”的意思。

  据说,以前美国乡村有一种“抓滑溜猪的比赛” The fairground contest of trying to catch a greased pig. 

  比赛方式就是:在露天赛场上,谁先捉到那只身上涂满油脂的猪,谁就能把它带回家去做薰肉。在食物匮乏的年代,一家人就可以美餐一顿了。

  例句:
  --He brought home the bacon by working three jobs. That's why he's in hospital now. 
  他打三份工来赚钱养家。这就是为什么他现在住院了。
  --You don't say.
  不会吧!

  NO.6
  see you home
  如果和歪果仁约会,结束的时候,对方对你说I will see you home,可千万别以为是“目送你回家”,人家其实是想把你亲自送回家~

  例句:
  Don't be afraid. I will see you home.
  别害怕,我会送你回家.

  NO.7
  homely
  回想下你在家的模样,是不是跟在外是两种状态呢?所以homely就有了“相貌平平的,家常的”的意思。

  例句:
  The man was homely and overweight. 
  该男子其貌不扬,身材肥胖。



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